Over the course of the semester, I have read, replied, and reflected on the ideas and values of my fellow classmates in’Social Media & Society’. What I have noticed has both shocked and surprised me. In reading the discussion posts and blog entries of some of my fellow online classmates, I am frightened by the negligence to proofreading and critical thinking. I am not some authoritative power that can deem your writing obsolete, but I am a college student and feel a certain degree of responsibility to criticize my peers when their skills deem criticism.
If you have a high school diploma then there is simply no excuse for you to not be able to write in complete coherent sentences. They do not have to be the most abstract ideas out there, but a sentence should be……well, a sentence. Fragments, run on sentences, and incomplete sentences are not college level writing standards. I should not have to slog through paragraph after paragraph of improper usage of punctuation.
As a student of Cardinal Stritch University, I expect to be held to the same standard of achievement as my classmates. I value my education as a reflection of my own work, as well as my classmates. Week after week I became incredibly demotivated when reading discussion post after discussion post that were merely cookie cutter clones of the last entry. We do each other no good by simply being average, blending into the pack. Our generation requires constructive self criticism and I aim to do that. No one should feel hesitant to call someone out on their ideas. The only way we can grow is if we are broken down and then rebuilt. Each skin we shed gives birth to a newer, improved insight. This is the way people have been learning since the dawn of academic thought.
These are thoughts that I have kept inside me for the entire semester. It may not be my place to say these things, but this is the land of the free and I will plead my first amendment right until my lungs collapse. My academic integrity depends on my ability to speak frankly and directly. This final reflection is my cry of outrage to whomever should read it.
I very well may have not been talking about you here. I have shared some intense connections with my classmates in all of my courses this semester and that statement rings true here as well. There are individuals whom have taught me much and through which I have been humbled. Do not inflect hate upon these words as you read them. If the ideas that I have shared cause you to stir, then reflect on your own competence as a communicator. None of us are perfect, and we can all improve.
Here’s to a future of academic growth, together.
Peace,
Sawyer Veseth